Comments on: Guest Blogger: Laurie Alice Eakes http://kellymortimer.com/2008/08/18/guest-blogger-laurie-alice-eakes/ Kelly Mortimer of Mortimer Literary Agency Tue, 06 Jan 2009 10:48:47 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.2.1 By: sheriboeyink http://kellymortimer.com/2008/08/18/guest-blogger-laurie-alice-eakes/#comment-257 sheriboeyink Mon, 18 Aug 2008 17:58:24 +0000 http://kellymortimer.com/2008/08/18/guest-blogger-laurie-alice-eakes/#comment-257 Hi Laurie. Thanks for the blog. I love how you so easily demonstrated this concept of spreading out the detail a bit versus bogging the reader down. Very helpful. I will remember to "sprinkle" as I go through my edits and revisions. Have a great day! Hi Laurie. Thanks for the blog. I love how you so easily demonstrated this concept of spreading out the detail a bit versus bogging the reader down. Very helpful.

I will remember to “sprinkle” as I go through my edits and revisions.

Have a great day!

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