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	<title>Comments on: Settings – Beyond Talking Heads, Bare Stage</title>
	<link>http://kellymortimer.com/2008/07/17/settings-%e2%80%93-beyond-talking-heads-bare-stage/</link>
	<description>Kelly Mortimer of Mortimer Literary Agency</description>
	<pubDate>Thu, 20 Nov 2008 20:20:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: sheriboeyink</title>
		<link>http://kellymortimer.com/2008/07/17/settings-%e2%80%93-beyond-talking-heads-bare-stage/#comment-216</link>
		<author>sheriboeyink</author>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Jul 2008 14:21:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I never really thought of describing setting through the POV character's perception until recently.  I was more about "laundry list" of description.  I'm doing the ACFW course with Colleen Coble now, and I am learning how to layer a character better and incorporate settings.  It's amazing.  
Thanks for the advise Lena.  I think I'm going to run to my WIP and do a search for "he said" and "she said" tags right now.    **sheri smiles**</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I never really thought of describing setting through the POV character&#8217;s perception until recently.  I was more about &#8220;laundry list&#8221; of description.  I&#8217;m doing the ACFW course with Colleen Coble now, and I am learning how to layer a character better and incorporate settings.  It&#8217;s amazing.<br />
Thanks for the advise Lena.  I think I&#8217;m going to run to my WIP and do a search for &#8220;he said&#8221; and &#8220;she said&#8221; tags right now.    **sheri smiles**</p>
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